User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar

"The most important aspect of a meditative practice is that of practicing mindfulness. A concept which can be broken down into two distinct subcomponents."

• sentence fragment. doesnt make sense by itself.

• "The most important aspect of a meditative practice is mindfulness, a concept which can be broken down into two distinct subcomponents."

"In order overcome this and document meditation as whole, psychonautwiki is simply going to devise a simple, open source, usable technique and set of information to define a generalized meditation methodology and its different components."

• this sounds terrible.... don't do this... you shouldn't be adding the word "psychonautwiki"

• "In order to overcome this and document meditation as a whole, a simple and usable open source technique and a set of information have been devised to define a generalized meditation methodology and its different components."

"This is with the belief that it will be equal or greater in efficiency within the way its regular practice induces specific subjective effects."

• ok you've already used the word "this" for every single sentence in this paragraph so think of something new now. and you need to make clear what "it" is.

This is repeated with the intention of quietening ones mind. quietening 11111111111111s im pretty sure the only time you'll ever use ones without an apostrophe is if you are detailing with actual number ones.

• • one's mind

always add apostrophe onto "ones"

The average human being which attemptes to quieten their thoughts will notice that their inner monologue will autonomously interject and distract one from the task at hand in a fashion which seems entirely uncontrollable.

"The average human being who"

• use "who" for people
• use "which" for things
• use "that" for things and (informally) people

attempts quiet

"During the performation of this task as an act of mediation, attention is placed upon the repetition of a repeated and outwardly spoken phrase of one's own choosing."

"During the performation of this task as an act of mediation, mindfulness is intensively placed upon the act of upholding a task of any sort with varying levels difficulty depending on what one chooses."

• performation isn't even a word... wtf

• it's called "performance"